The Proverbial Bull in a China Shop... ([info]sabaceanbabe) wrote in [info]bsg2003fics,
  • Music: Tom McRae, self-titled

Time to Kill the King

Title: Time to Kill the King
Author: SabaceanBabe
Word Count: 537
Character: Galactica!Boomer
Setting: the last few minutes of Kobol's Last Gleaming 2
Disclaimer: Setting, song lyrics, characters, so not mine.
Authors Note: This fic was inspired by the lovely and talented [info]dangermousie's Dualla fic, Optimist. Go read it.



Time to Kill the King

It’s time to kill the king
It’s written in the Scripture

So forgive me, forgive me
For I am born to be what I must be

--Tom McRae, The Boy With the Bubblegun



The stench of cordite permeates the air, mixing with the metallic scent of blood. The double report of a firearm echoes in Sharon’s head. Someone jostles her arm as they rush past, toward tactical. She looks around at the familiar people, equipment, workstations that are CIC. Nothing makes sense. There is frenetic, panicked movement swirling all around her, but it’s as though she is a prisoner in a transparent, unbreakable bubble.

Perhaps the Cylons have attacked Galactica – revenge for the destruction of a Basestar…

A heavy body slams into her and Sharon is thrown to the deck, crushed beneath the weight of a man in black fatigues. The scent of garlic and onions is overpowering and she gags. Her head hits the deck hard – once, twice – and a searing pain tears through her skull, its epicenter her right cheek. She vaguely recalls an injury there.

And still nothing makes sense.

Sharon struggles against the heavy weight, tries to push the man – a Marine? – off her before he slams her head to the deck again. He shouts something at her, forces something from her hand, roughly pulls her to her feet, but all she understands is the sound of her own voice, calm and soothing. “You’re confused and scared, but it’s okay…” Her own whispering voice surrounds her. “You can’t fight destiny, Sharon. It catches up with you no matter what you do. We love you, Sharon, and we always will…”

Apollo’s shout breaks through the white noise of her own voice, frantic and strident. “Someone get a doctor! Get Doc Cottle!”

An odd sight, infinitely more odd than that of Apollo in handcuffs, penetrates the suffocating bubble: the Old Man is sprawled on his back across the tactical display. A pool of red grows beneath him, stains her vision, initiates a crimson drone in the back of her brain that slowly drowns all remaining thought.

Sharon hears nothing save the droning buzz. Her eyes focus on Dee, who holds the Commander’s limp hand to her cheek as if letting go would mean the end of the world.

But hasn’t the world already ended?

There is a cold kiss of metal at her wrists and her arms are wrenched behind her back. Sharon sees Adama’s craggy face as she is pulled roughly away; it’s strangely soft, lax. The hideous pool under his unmoving body has infected the faces of those around him with its scarlet stain.

Doc Cottle runs into CIC as though the hounds of Hades are snapping at his heels; the officers and crew surrounding tactical break before him like surf. All except Dee, who refuses to release the Old Man’s hand. Even Apollo has no choice but to back away – more Marines are there, pulling him away from the fallen Commander.

Sharon’s voice whispers inside her head, directionless and all encompassing. “We love you. You can’t fight destiny. This has all happened before, and it will happen again.”

Trapped inside herself, Sharon begins to scream.

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  • 37 comments

[info]dangermousie

April 27 2005, 17:21:13 UTC 7 years ago

As I said earlier: I loved the disorientation and detachment of this fic. And the last line just kills me.

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 27 2005, 19:23:50 UTC 7 years ago

What's really funny is that I chose the tense I used 'cause I thought it had a greater immediacy. :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the beta, too. Well, and for the inspiration! :)

[info]un4scene

April 27 2005, 18:28:56 UTC 7 years ago

You have a really great hand with Sharon, I must say. Nice background on that (so quick) very confused look she has after the shooting.

I have no technical feedback to give (me no read), but I can say I really enjoyed reading this piece as well.

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 27 2005, 19:25:05 UTC 7 years ago

Aww... Thanks! I'm a sucker for those who can act without saying anything. You know, like Claudia. And Ben. And now Grace and Tahmoh, too. Hee.

[info]un4scene

7 years ago

[info]un4scene

7 years ago

[info]shadowserenity

April 27 2005, 20:44:36 UTC 7 years ago

I'll just readily agree with everything un4 said. Loved it :).

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 28 2005, 13:40:02 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you, Ams. :)

[info]lyssie

April 28 2005, 06:10:15 UTC 7 years ago

oh, ow. Hurts, but hurts GOOD.

*shivers*

[info]pualaridesagain

April 28 2005, 11:56:28 UTC 7 years ago

amazing how you caught that one moment of thought with such clarity. It scared me a little bit, and I liked it!

[info]livilla

April 28 2005, 17:19:08 UTC 7 years ago

Nice fic. You can feel Sharon's numbness and the sense of panic and chaos is dulled but still on the fringes. Way cool.

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 28 2005, 17:53:51 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks, ay! I just feel for the poor thing, you know?

[info]livilla

7 years ago

[info]dingoaction

April 29 2005, 01:04:06 UTC 7 years ago

one of my favorite things about your writing is how spectacular it is the whole way through--you notice the little things all the way through.

liked the buzzing in the back of her head again (that was you, wasn't it?), and I loved the tense, kind of wraps you in the moment (which I actually love that you did from someone else's pov--it'd be interesting to see it from other people there, too...Lee helpless in handcuffs (a thought which actually spawns an entirely different type of fic), for example. but I digress)

last thing: adore the "But hasn’t the world already ended?"

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 29 2005, 15:14:50 UTC 7 years ago

Aww. You're making me blush. :) And yep, the buzzing in the head thing is me. Hee.

And now I have these naughty pictures in my head of Lee in handcuffs in a totally different situation. And no, I won't share. :P

[info]brightest_blue

April 29 2005, 01:49:47 UTC 7 years ago

All I can say is WOW and Fantastic!

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 29 2005, 15:12:57 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[info]betareject

April 29 2005, 04:26:42 UTC 7 years ago

Oh poor Boomer this scene is so sad watching her world crumble before her very eyes and how she finds herself both confused and unable to understand what has just happened. The ending is so chilling and so perfect beautifully done!

[info]sabaceanbabe

April 29 2005, 15:12:08 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! :)

I just have this image in my mind (or maybe more of an impression) that she just had a complete break with reality at that point and that there are now two personalities in poor little GBoomer: the Cylon and the human woman.

Hmmm.... There may be another fic in there...

[info]betareject

7 years ago

[info]blood_fantasies

April 30 2005, 02:11:05 UTC 7 years ago

I'm sorry that I didn't have the chance to comment earlier, but...this is fabulous. Brilliant; something in it just really struck a chord with me. You captured Galac!Boomer perfectly. So tragic, and so very dark.

//is envious// Lovely, lovely, lovely.

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 2 2005, 14:17:46 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you, dear. *hug*

[info]orci505

April 30 2005, 15:59:04 UTC 7 years ago

I love the feeling of detachment you get when reading this, like Sharon, and in turn the reader, is so outside herself, viewing everything from so far away that she doesn't understand what is happening. What's really scary, though, is that some small part of her does know what's going on, what's happening, and it is been brought about by her hand. What a horrible thing to live with!

This was wonderful. It rang so true of her struggles throughout the eps up to and including the finale. :)

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 2 2005, 14:15:51 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks for reading and for the feedback!

This whole scene was so short but just so packed with details that could only be brought about by the actors involved. Grace did such a wonderful job here that this fic was almost easy. :)

[info]spacefiend

May 6 2005, 15:36:35 UTC 7 years ago

Really good fic. Just excellent.

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 6 2005, 16:07:55 UTC 7 years ago

:) Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[info]biichan

May 8 2005, 01:07:07 UTC 7 years ago

Oh wow. Poor frakked-up Sharon. Poor, poor frakked-up Sharon.

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 9 2005, 14:18:12 UTC 7 years ago

Poor thing just needs a big ol' cookie, huh? :) Thanks for reading!

[info]counterfeitcoin

May 8 2005, 19:00:39 UTC 7 years ago

I don't know what I can say beyond that this was really good.

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 9 2005, 14:18:49 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you! No more need be said. :)

[info]rensong

May 9 2005, 01:44:53 UTC 7 years ago

Got here through [info]crack_van, and I just have to say how much I love how you wrote Boomer here. That's *exactally* how I think she would have reacted, prisioner in her own body, wondering what the heck is going on and why there was a gun in her hands.

I asked the same of [info]dangermousie as both of your fics kinda go together, but do you mind if I rec this in my own journal? I post recs mostly for myself so I can put them in my memories and go back and reread them, but if you want it posted as a locked post or not at all, I can do that too. :)

[info]sabaceanbabe

May 9 2005, 14:21:38 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely feedback. Woohoo! I've got a fic recced on [info]crack_van!

Feel free to rec. I'm so happy you enjoyed it enough to share with others. *hug*

[info]rensong

7 years ago

[info]heidiweidel

July 4 2005, 17:44:49 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks so much for sending me the link to your fic! I just had to read it after seeing the video that you requested be made from the song. What a great choice of song to quote; it's so perfectly appropriate.

I love your use of the present tense -- it creates the immediacy of the moment in the show. You are great at description as well -- the sights, sounds, and smells come alive here. But you are succinct in your writing; every word is so carefully chosen. You capture this moment and expand it and yet encapsulate it.

And I agree about this show being another example of how brilliantly people can act without words -- it's what I love about Amanda Tapping and Richard Dean Anderson in Stargate, too. It's often very hard to capture in writing, though. You have done a splendid job here. Kudos!
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