Author: SabaceanBabe
Word Count: 537
Character: Galactica!Boomer
Setting: the last few minutes of Kobol's Last Gleaming 2
Disclaimer: Setting, song lyrics, characters, so not mine.
Authors Note: This fic was inspired by the lovely and talented
Time to Kill the King
It’s time to kill the king
It’s written in the Scripture
…
So forgive me, forgive me
For I am born to be what I must be
--Tom McRae, The Boy With the Bubblegun
The stench of cordite permeates the air, mixing with the metallic scent of blood. The double report of a firearm echoes in Sharon’s head. Someone jostles her arm as they rush past, toward tactical. She looks around at the familiar people, equipment, workstations that are CIC. Nothing makes sense. There is frenetic, panicked movement swirling all around her, but it’s as though she is a prisoner in a transparent, unbreakable bubble.
Perhaps the Cylons have attacked Galactica – revenge for the destruction of a Basestar…
A heavy body slams into her and Sharon is thrown to the deck, crushed beneath the weight of a man in black fatigues. The scent of garlic and onions is overpowering and she gags. Her head hits the deck hard – once, twice – and a searing pain tears through her skull, its epicenter her right cheek. She vaguely recalls an injury there.
And still nothing makes sense.
Sharon struggles against the heavy weight, tries to push the man – a Marine? – off her before he slams her head to the deck again. He shouts something at her, forces something from her hand, roughly pulls her to her feet, but all she understands is the sound of her own voice, calm and soothing. “You’re confused and scared, but it’s okay…” Her own whispering voice surrounds her. “You can’t fight destiny, Sharon. It catches up with you no matter what you do. We love you, Sharon, and we always will…”
Apollo’s shout breaks through the white noise of her own voice, frantic and strident. “Someone get a doctor! Get Doc Cottle!”
An odd sight, infinitely more odd than that of Apollo in handcuffs, penetrates the suffocating bubble: the Old Man is sprawled on his back across the tactical display. A pool of red grows beneath him, stains her vision, initiates a crimson drone in the back of her brain that slowly drowns all remaining thought.
Sharon hears nothing save the droning buzz. Her eyes focus on Dee, who holds the Commander’s limp hand to her cheek as if letting go would mean the end of the world.
But hasn’t the world already ended?
There is a cold kiss of metal at her wrists and her arms are wrenched behind her back. Sharon sees Adama’s craggy face as she is pulled roughly away; it’s strangely soft, lax. The hideous pool under his unmoving body has infected the faces of those around him with its scarlet stain.
Doc Cottle runs into CIC as though the hounds of Hades are snapping at his heels; the officers and crew surrounding tactical break before him like surf. All except Dee, who refuses to release the Old Man’s hand. Even Apollo has no choice but to back away – more Marines are there, pulling him away from the fallen Commander.
Sharon’s voice whispers inside her head, directionless and all encompassing. “We love you. You can’t fight destiny. This has all happened before, and it will happen again.”
Trapped inside herself, Sharon begins to scream.
April 27 2005, 17:21:13 UTC 7 years ago
April 27 2005, 19:23:50 UTC 7 years ago
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the beta, too. Well, and for the inspiration! :)
April 27 2005, 18:28:56 UTC 7 years ago
I have no technical feedback to give (me no read), but I can say I really enjoyed reading this piece as well.
April 27 2005, 19:25:05 UTC 7 years ago
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*shivers*
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April 29 2005, 01:04:06 UTC 7 years ago
liked the buzzing in the back of her head again (that was you, wasn't it?), and I loved the tense, kind of wraps you in the moment (which I actually love that you did from someone else's pov--it'd be interesting to see it from other people there, too...Lee helpless in handcuffs (a thought which actually spawns an entirely different type of fic), for example. but I digress)
last thing: adore the "But hasn’t the world already ended?"
April 29 2005, 15:14:50 UTC 7 years ago
And now I have these naughty pictures in my head of Lee in handcuffs in a totally different situation. And no, I won't share. :P
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April 29 2005, 15:12:08 UTC 7 years ago
I just have this image in my mind (or maybe more of an impression) that she just had a complete break with reality at that point and that there are now two personalities in poor little GBoomer: the Cylon and the human woman.
Hmmm.... There may be another fic in there...
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April 30 2005, 02:11:05 UTC 7 years ago
//is envious// Lovely, lovely, lovely.
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April 30 2005, 15:59:04 UTC 7 years ago
This was wonderful. It rang so true of her struggles throughout the eps up to and including the finale. :)
May 2 2005, 14:15:51 UTC 7 years ago
This whole scene was so short but just so packed with details that could only be brought about by the actors involved. Grace did such a wonderful job here that this fic was almost easy. :)
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May 9 2005, 01:44:53 UTC 7 years ago
I asked the same of
May 9 2005, 14:21:38 UTC 7 years ago
Feel free to rec. I'm so happy you enjoyed it enough to share with others. *hug*
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July 4 2005, 17:44:49 UTC 6 years ago
I love your use of the present tense -- it creates the immediacy of the moment in the show. You are great at description as well -- the sights, sounds, and smells come alive here. But you are succinct in your writing; every word is so carefully chosen. You capture this moment and expand it and yet encapsulate it.
And I agree about this show being another example of how brilliantly people can act without words -- it's what I love about Amanda Tapping and Richard Dean Anderson in Stargate, too. It's often very hard to capture in writing, though. You have done a splendid job here. Kudos!